the essay needs to stay the way it is. i just need the corrections the professor wants.
Professor notes
Rewrite your essay using “The Lottery” for the details, discussion, and quotations. Each paragraph should back up its topic sentence (one of the themes) and have at least one significant quotation as the basis of your ideas/discussion. Then write a concluding paragraph which reaffirms the three themes.
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ENGL 102